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 * ===Example question===

Your college has received a large donation from a recent graduate who has specified that the money be use to enhance the quality of life for students. Two proposals for using the money have been made. One proposal is to expand the campus bookstore to include music CDs, gifts, and a snack bar. The other proposal is to add more computers to the computer lab. There is enough money to fund only one of these proposals. Write a letter to the dean of the college in which you argue for expanding the bookstore or for adding more computers to the computer lab. Begin your letter: //dear College Dean.//


 * ===Body paragraph===

Unfortunately, our computer labs do not equipped with enough computer to meet the needs for BMCC students to complete their assignments. Now students have to wait on line sometimes 30 to 40 minutes just to be able to use the computer for one hour. Our students, most of who have jobs, spend one waiting and then they don't have enough computer time to finish their work. Sometimes students can have three or four assignments to complete on the computer for the next day. They may have to do a Math practice text, prepare a power point presentation for speech and write an essay to practice for the ACT. There is no way that a student could finish his or her work in that limited time. If we had more computers, students would not have to have to wait so long on line and they would have enough time to finish teir assignments. Of course 300 computer are not enough to solve the problem completely, but it will make the situation better.